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Sniper Twilie by Wreky Sniper Twilie by Wreky
So I just finished this...









Enjoy.
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Pros:

- Once again as with your previous picture, the detail to the eyes and hair is very impressive. The eyelashes are very different to how they would usually look in the series but it works very well in this image and that's not easy to pull off.
- The overall anatomy is spot on. Twi's rear left leg is now the correct length as in contrast to your other image where I mentioned Pirate Rarity's leg was too long.
- A background! This really adds impact and depth to the image.
- The magical aura has been greatly improved and is one of my favourite parts of this image.

Cons:

- While the gun overall is very good, there are areas in which there could be some detailing. For example, there are areas above the trigger that are just one single plain colour. In contrast to the rest of the detailing around the picture this sticks out a bit and doesn't belong. Maybe fill the largest area with Twi's cutie mark? Small details like this can add to the overall image greatly.
- Twi's rear right leg is not shaded in the same way as the rest of the body. Although I believe that this was intentional I have to say that in my personal opinion it would look better shaded in the same way as the rest of the body has been.
- The shadow on the floor suggests the light source is coming from directly above Twi. The shadows created from the gun on her body would suggest that the light source is coming from behind the 'camera'. The shadow on the floor should be moved to be behind her and not directly below her to solve this issue.
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:iconjungledyret-2000:
JungleDyret-2000 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014
She's cool!!! I love her! :love:
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:iconneomiles:
NeoMiles Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
The recoil might poke her eye out. Ouch.
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:icondarkangelofotaku:
DarkAngelofOtaku Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013

Twilight's giving them a "piece" of her mind.

 

Yeah... I went there.

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:iconspessmehrins:
SpessMehrins Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You best keep lyin' down... :iconsniperplz:
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:iconbroobroo:
BrooBroo Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Student General Artist
dude: IMMA KILL U!

twilight: *pulls out sniper* KILL DIAS BITCH! *shoots*

EPIC FOR THE WIN!
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:iconmobuislead147:
mobuislead147 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
"One shot, one spell."
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:icontoby-victoria:
toby-victoria Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
360 no hooves double kill ladder shot !!
+5,000points
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:iconpairho:
PaiRho Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
Twilight has very good taste, and thats a well done pic.
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:icondoughnutjoe:
DoughnutJoe Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
:icontwilitesparkleplz:"Of course the stealth telekinesis spell requires a bit more concentration. But since it allows you to hold your rifle without covering it in the glowing aura produced by standard telekinesis, it greatly helps in concealing your firing position."
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:iconwreky:
Wreky Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
muahahhaa<3
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:iconnexus65:
Nexus65 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
the weapon looks like from "Pinmp My Gun"
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:iconnexus65:
Nexus65 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
Pimp*
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:iconotherdark:
OtherDark Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
I was like, "That rifle looks like the Longsword from DE:HR..."
Then I noticed the faded words "Deus Ex" in the lower left. Win.
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:iconstatoose:
statoose Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012   Digital Artist
Very cool!
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:iconattackwithhugs:
AttackWithHugs Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
TwilightJensen approves.
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:iconhelsaabi:
Helsaabi Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
I really like it! X3
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:iconpootiet12345:
pootiet12345 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:icontwilightsparkleplz: :iconsaysplz: i staked out for a week, didnt eat or sleep... and discord survived a direct fucking headshot!!!
:iconmlpdiscordplz: :iconsaysplz: derp derp chaos
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:iconwreky:
Wreky Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
win
/brohoof
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:iconpootiet12345:
pootiet12345 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*daps*
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:iconcoltsteelstallion:
Coltsteelstallion Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
Awsome pic...
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:icone-man300:
E-man300 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
I feel so bad for her target
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:iconashoof:
Ashoof Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
woot! more ponies with guns! i love the choice for the rifle to :) VERY.NICELY.DONE. good sir
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:iconwreky:
Wreky Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
^_^
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:icongoldenarbiter:
GoldenArbiter Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
This is great. 'Nuff said.
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:iconsilverfang-steelwolf:
Silverfang-SteelWolf Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconnotamusedtwilightplz: Twi never asked for this.
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:iconwreky:
Wreky Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
its funny cause the eye with the patch is the same eye that is augmented in the image... <3
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:iconeverlastingjoy:
EverlastingJoy Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
BTW, I saw this on EqD as part of an article on "You've got one shot to convert a hater friend." Check it out here: [link]
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:iconwreky:
Wreky Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
mhmm
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:iconeverlastingjoy:
EverlastingJoy Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
:icontwilightsparkleplz::iconthinksplz:One shot
*bang
:icontwilightsparkleplz::iconthinksplz:One kill
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:iconpavelgun93:
pavelgun93 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"Be polite. Be efficient. Have a plan to make friends with everypony you meet."
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:iconwreky:
Wreky Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
<3
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:iconthelastlonewolf:
thelastlonewolf Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
one word, awesome.
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:iconwreky:
Wreky Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
^_^
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:iconsqarishoctagon:
sqarishoctagon Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
That's pretty sweet man.
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:iconwreky:
Wreky Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:D
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:icondm4544:
Dm4544 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
Wankas.
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:iconmegapatron:
MegaPatron Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
that awesome
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:icontsuyoshiprower:
TsuyoshiPrower Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
Dude.
This. is. Epic.
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:iconwreky:
Wreky Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
^_^
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:iconcrazy-asian:
crazy-asian Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
anyone know of a good FiM fanfic that has that involves the mane 6 in a deus ex setting?
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:iconwreky:
Wreky Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
try fimfiction, should be one there.
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:iconcrazy-asian:
crazy-asian Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
I have, but i don't see any that have the mane 6 as the main characters
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:iconwreky:
Wreky Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
oh well then, get writing!
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:iconcrazy-asian:
crazy-asian Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012
lol, I am no author
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:iconnikkikitty44:
NikkiKitty44 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
Ya prancin' show ponies!
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:iconwreky:
Wreky Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
gotta love the Sniopah!
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:iconsiarnaq21:
Siarnaq21 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I always felt like Twi would prefer a PSG1, personally.
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:iconwreky:
Wreky Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Deus Ex setting so I just HAD to use the Longsword 202 ERASER <3
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:iconistarian:
Istarian Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
Anyone notice the cybernetics-esque wires on/in the head, hexagonal chip like shape, and the possible meaning of the squiggles in the eye?

@*IAmMerriweather

I take that to mean that you do.
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